[合集] 【原创仿剧本】goodbye,my love(09.08.05更新完结)

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-26 13:46 编辑

刚刚有点无聊,特别想写些乱七八糟的东西,于是这篇brian和justin的番外(面前算是吧,呵呵)其实就是一个我脑海里设想的离别镜头,贴出来与“知己”分享,水平太一般,各位亲们多多包涵,欢迎多提意见。

goodbye,my love

Scene:the Pittsburgh airport

Justin was going aboard an aeroplane  to N.Y.  
  

Justin(passport and air ticket in his hand): we don't need any commitment to prove our love, right?

(低着头,片刻无语,突然抬头,凝视着brian)

Justin:I’ll be back,I promise.

              The memorise will belong to us in common,forever.



Justin(上前抱住Brian,在耳边轻轻说):Keep in touch with me,ok?

  
During going forward to the entrance, suddenly Justin turned around and shout aloud.

Justin:Brian!(一时哽咽)

        I—— LOVE——YOU!

Brian一怔,之后微微扯动一下嘴角,神色平静,看不出是喜是悲

Brian:Hey——remember that?

       ——no excuses.no apologies.no regrets.
  
Brian(深深地望着Justin):go,and find your way,sunshine!

Brian露出一抹略带苦涩的含蓄笑容,Justin眼眶微微湿润,伫立在原地

Justin(望着brian挥动的手,默默地):goodbye Pittsburgh.

                                                         goodbye——my love.


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【原创】missing you

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:46 编辑

scene:N.Y.CITY  12:00 P.M.

JUSTIN TAYLOR WHO WAS A NEW SHINNING STAR OF ARTS IN N.Y. WAS PAINTING IN HIS APARTMENT.

A RINGING FROM THE TELEPHONE BROKE THE SILENCE OF MID-NIGHT.

HE DIDN'T CARE ABOUT IT AT ALL,AND FOCUSED ON HIS NEW CREATION——MISSING.

AFTER KEEPING NOISY FOR A MOMENT,IT STOPPED.THE ENTIRE ROOM WAS QUIET AGAIN.

SOME TIMES LATER...

SUDDENLY HE PUT DOWN THE BRUSH AND LOOKED AT THE CANVAS THOUGHTFULLY.

Justin(看了一眼手腕上的表,已是凌晨一点,露出一抹淡淡的微笑):DONE.


                                                                                              FOR MY 24-YEAR-OLD.

HE WALKED TO THE SOFA,PUTTING HIS ASS IN IT AND PRESSED THE KEY OF TELEPHONE ANSWERING MACHINE.

TELEPHONE:THERE IS ONE VOICE-MESSAGE YOU'V GOT.

JUSTIN WAS EXHAUSTED,CLOSED HIS EYES.

TELEPHONE(BRIAN'S VOICE):...HEY SUNNY BOY,IT'S ME...HOW'S IT GOING...I AM GOING TO NEWYORK TOMORROW...UH...TAKE A VACATION.YOU KNOW I'V BEEN BUSY,SO(局促地笑了两声)——WHATEVER,SEE YOU LATER.

JUSTIN STILL KEPT HIS EYES CLOSED WITH A SOFT SMILE.

JUSTIN(幽幽地):MISS YOU...

TO BE CONTINUED
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2# cora
首先谢谢cora对我的鼓励,呵,写的不好,希望你经常来“串门子”,多交流哦
然后就是回答你的问题——其实下一篇写什么和什么时候开始写都还没决定,呵,有空的时候吧,应该不会太迟。:s14

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【原创】I'm coming

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:47 编辑

Scene:  John F. Kennedy International Airport of N.Y.City  10:45 A.M.

At the Exit

Brian Kinney who wore a black short coat,dark blue jeans and sunglasses was going out from the exit,carring a baggage.

Brian(停住脚步,摘下墨镜, 环顾四周来来往往忙碌的人们,微微颔首,嘴角漾起一抹自嘲的微笑):God.It's unbelieveable I come here.
         I am absolutly crazy.

The cellphone in his pocket was ringing.He took it out and opened the cover.
A message was on the screen:

     "Hey,welcom.How's NewYork's air?:) Today I have a show in PaceWildenstein.See u there.

     10:50 A.M. From :SUNSHINE"

Brian(盯着屏幕的双眼泄露了心情,笑容更加深了): My sunshine is busy glaring in New York.

Brian closed his cellphone and walked out the terminal.

Scene:Out the teminal

Brian(单手遮挡着刺眼的阳光,抬头看看晴朗如洗的天空,又重新戴上Prada的新款墨镜):
                                                       Hello New York!

                                                                                  I'm coming,my artist.


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6# mik
惭愧啊,半中不洋的风格实在是本人英文水平有限造成的,并非为了创新,口语化的东西没那么多限制,而且表达简单,旁白要有些辅助说明的深层意义在里面,所以一定得借住母语,呵  一定让mik失望了吧:s37
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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刚刚又完成了一个小段,欢迎有兴趣的亲们去踩哦,呵,功力尚浅,各方面水平有待提高,希望喜欢我这种仿剧本风格的各位能多支持多提意见:s25
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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【原创】Justin's diary(片段)

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:02 编辑

分离,对很多人来说,可能是痛苦的终点。  
Separation, for many people, may be a finishi.

但,我坚信,它对我们来说,必会是幸福的起点。
But i believe,it must be a start of happiness for us.

我们更深切地意识到对方之于自己生命的意义。
We are more profoundly aware of the meaning to each other in our lives.

生命,是一种围绕着爱的回归,我们就是彼此的终点,就像最初开始的那样。
If life is a  return surrounding  love , we will be the end of each other, just as the very beginning.
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life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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12# cora
呵,本只想在临睡之前顺便来论坛看一眼,真没想到随手的只言片语,能让大家讨论得如此兴致勃勃,我也很开心呢:s21
不是不想写长一点的文儿,实在是时间有限啊,只能在有灵感的时候抽空写上几笔“解馋”,呵,长篇的话肯定也是个大坑,不敢忽悠了大家来跳啊~但是,我会尽力发扬短小精悍的优良传统滴:s12
最后,还是很老套的——谢谢各位亲们的支持~~~good night~~~sweet dreams
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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[原创]I'v been waiting for you

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-4 22:43 编辑

这次想营造的场面稍微大一点,所以中文比较多,呵呵,但是对话我还是坚持英文,这样比较能传达出那个味道,成文比较仓促,有不足之处请大家见谅~


PaceWildenstein Gallery   2:30 P.M.

本该是人迹寥寥的慵懒午后,N.Y.知名画廊PaceWildenstein此刻却衣香鬓影,宾客云集,宛若hollywood大片的首映现场,唯一不同的是没有疯狂fans的尖叫声和太多的闪光灯夺人眼球,来者皆是些慕名而来的艺术爱好者、评论人及艺术经纪人等,当然其中也不乏N.Y.艺术圈中的元老级人物。慢步浏览着墙上一幅幅风格迥异的画作,他们或三两结伴低声耳语几句,或托腮思索着什么,更有些精明的商人已经在角落谈论起此次画展的盈利和接下来市场推广的计划。而让这各路人马赏光和竞相追捧的原因,无非是一个名字——Justin Taylor——近两年来,以其卓越的绘画天赋、独特而敏锐的表达视角,迅速蹿红于N.Y.艺术圈,作品亦被众多收藏家青睐的年轻的艺术家。

PassagerA(兴奋地左顾右盼):I heard he will come today.

PassagerB(一脸茫然):you mean?

PassagerA(鄙夷地看着伙伴):you're kidding,right?
                           
PassagerB(很无奈地,耸耸肩膀,两手一摊)

PassagerA(不置可否地翻个白眼):J.T.
                                                   I mean Justin Taylor is coming to have a short speech later.

PassagerB(兴奋):really?!   oh,god,we're so luncky,man!

           (环视四周):which one would be him?




Brian Kinney身着黑色Armani新款西装,双手插着口袋,自信优雅地步入画廊,随着缓慢移动的人流,开始有一搭无一搭地欣赏着墙上的画作,眼神却散布在画廊的各个角落,寻找着那抹属于他的熟悉的身影。

a few minutes later...

Justin(从背后拍拍Brian的肩膀,含笑,戏谑的口气):Are you looking for someone? Can I help you ?

Brian(从鼻子里闷笑一声,一脸玩世不恭地慢慢转过身):yeah.

看见Justin的一瞬间,眼神专注且复杂,旋即又闪烁着孩子般恶作剧的表情

Brian(抿嘴,看向别处,立刻又调转眼神紧盯着Jusitn,假笑,并一本正经地模仿着):The person said to me"It's my pleasure to work under you" and he was ever the hotest waiter on the liberal avenue. Do you know him?

Justin忍不住轻声地笑出声

不远处,Justin的经纪人David Brown走到他身边

David(略微打量了一下一旁的Brian,公式化的微笑,算是打过招呼了):Excuse me

Brian(无所谓的耸耸肩膀,招呼不远处的端着饮料盘的waiter):hey waiter~

David把Justin拉到一边,低头在他耳边说了些什么之后便离开了

Brian拿着盛着法国红酒的杯子走近Justin身边

Brian(有点调侃):he is a hot guy

Justin(笑容加深,语带暧昧):so ~~~hot~~~

                                             but——less than somebody

Justin认真的看着Brian,绽开了久违的灿烂笑容,张开双臂

Justin(语带双关):I'v been waiting for you.

Brian(楞了一下,看看周围,确定有一些人用好奇的眼光望着这边,
                 不羁地笑着抱住Justin,语意不明地在耳边低语):sorry,I don't know  you're so urgent sunshine.


TO BE CONTINUED
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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【原创】Justin's diary+I'm proud of you

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-16 00:14 编辑

Justin's diary

Brian said "love should not be a sacrifice".

So I came to NewYork two years ago.

When I lost some things,I gained the others.

The true love should be a strong back of everyone,no matter when and where,just he or she need it.





11:35 P.M.    BY FRENCH WINDOW OF JUSTIN'S APARTMENT


Brian(依着一边的窗框,接过Justin递过来啤酒,喝了一口,眼光在屋里四处游走,打量略微凌乱却干净的屋子): ...nice place

Justin走到Brian身边,面对着巨大的落地窗,带着一丝与白天的意气风发截然相反的疲惫与落寞,欣赏着五光十色的纽约夜景。


Justin(夺过Brian手里的啤酒,喝了一口,看着Brian,轻松地笑):Thanks.It is surprising that you can say it.Are you Brian Kinney? You're sure?

Brian(低笑一声,挑衅地走到Justin身后,单臂勾上他的脖子,轻咬着他的耳垂):Aha~so?What should I say just like me?

Justin被Brian弄得有点痒,却没有躲开,轻笑着,又灌了一口啤酒,显然不打算解释Brian的评价方式向来与尖酸刻薄划等号。


两人一时无语,若有所思,时间仿佛定格在此刻。

Justin(安静地靠在Brian怀里,满足地深吸一口气):I miss you...

Brian(逗弄着在Justin耳边吹气):I miss you too... especially in the midnight.

Brian的话勾起了Justin对年少时那段青涩疯狂的爱恋的回忆,心头泛起丝丝甜蜜。

Justin转过身,一扫刚刚的调侃情绪,认真地凝视着眼前的这个人。

Justin(抚摸着Brian有些胡渣的脸颊):You are always confident,you are still young and hot,just as what Michael said.

Brian(卸下玩世不恭的面具,理了理Justin额前炫目的金发,真诚地):You have been not that little boy any more,my artist.
                                                                You did a really good job,you know.
                                                                You are successful.
                                                               Now you are famous and have a lot of fans and opportunities.

Brian(温柔地在Justin额头落下轻轻一吻):I'm so proud of you,sunshine.

皎洁的月光透过落地窗撒在两人脚边。Justin与Brian拥着彼此,相视一笑。

突然Brian手机响起。

Brian:Dame shit!

Justin(抿嘴笑着,揶揄Brian):Melody

Brian(不耐烦地接起电话):yeah

Cellphone(Michael' voice,抽泣,努力保持平静):...Ben...he has gone...


TO BE CONTINUED

PS:一个看过QAF的好友说我不应该局限在B&J的故事里,所以接下来可能会尝试写写别人的故事,于是乎,不得已,篇末把Michael带了进来(喜欢M和BEN的同志们,请见谅~~~)呵,欲知后事如何,且听俺下回分解。
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life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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[原创]where is Brian?

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-16 00:22 编辑

Scene:in front of Debbie's house

  Doorbell rang.(a moment later...)Debbie opened the door.

  Emmett and Drewboyd stood there.

Emmett(双手手指交叉放在身前,勉强扬了扬嘴角,思考如何开口,有点手足无措):Hi,Debbie.I...uh...I've known about it.I mean...uh...

Drewboyd(温柔地看一眼Em,握住他的手,遗憾的看向Deb):I'm sorry for hear that.

Em看着Deb,泪水浸湿眼眶。

Debbie(满脸倦容,强打精神,仍回了Em一个坚强的微笑,上前抱住Em,安慰地拍拍他的肩膀):I know ,honey.Come on and in.


Scene:in the living-room

Debbie(朝冰箱走去):what would you like to drink?
                                   Juice?  coffee?

Drewboyd(单手搂着Em的肩膀,在沙发坐下):No,thanks,Deb.

Emmett(冷静下来):How's Michael?

Debbie打开冰箱,拿出盛有自制cookie的盘子,僵了一下,转身走向Em.

Debbie(把盘子放下,叹气):Nothing is worse.

                                           He has been in his room for an entire day.no eating,no drinking,didn't say any words.

Doorbell rang again.

Debbie:I'm coming.

Debbie opened the door.Ted、Melanie and Lindsay stood there.

Ted(认真地):I think Michael need all of us now,so I called Mel and Linds.

Lindsay(一脸震惊,摇头,拥抱Deb):I can't believe it is true.

Melanie(拥抱Deb,安慰):I'm really sorry.

Debbie(抱着Mel和lindz,双手摸摸她们的背,拍了拍):I know. Thanks for your coming girls.Come with me.

Scene:in the living-room

Emmett(激动地站起来,拥抱Lindsay和Melanie):oh,girls.

Drewboyd(向Lindsay和Melanie点头):Hi~

Melanie(挤出个微笑):Hi~

Melanie(转向Debbie,无奈地耸耸肩):About Ben's disease,I mean——so——I don't know how to say it.

Debbie(了然地):Yes,we all know the day will come sooner or later,but it is still a tremendous hit to Michael.

Ted(四处张望了一下):Uh...where is Michael?

大家面面相觑,一时无语,悲伤地情绪弥漫开来。

Debbie:He is upstairs,in his room.

Lindsay(平复了情绪,突然意识到什么,环视大家):damn!Where is  Brian?


PS:昨天安慰了一个失恋的朋友,她很有感触地说:“关键时刻还是老友靠的住”。于是,特别想写一片关于大家的。爱情的美丽在于为我们的生命锦上添花,而亲情和友情却是我们存在的根基,帮我们走过阴霾。珍惜,是我唯一想说的,珍惜现在拥有的一切,生命无常,不要将遗憾留给明天。
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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2# cora
谢谢cora提醒,我也在考虑:s14      打算明天考完交则有空再弄,呵
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  • cora

life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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5# cora

交通法规,不知道为啥,教练都简称为“交则”,呵
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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陆续更新ing,呵

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-21 13:46 编辑

to be with you,my friends

scene: in Justin's Studio of N.Y.City    3:15 P.M.
A fierce debate was being between Justin and David(Justin's agent).

David(烦躁地在不大的空间里踱来踱去,松了松领带,停下来深吸一口气,尽力让自己保持冷静,转过身面对Justin):Taylor,please calm down ,and then think about it again,carefully,ok?
Justin(单手从身后撑着,靠着工作台,冷静地再次试图跟David沟通):David I'll come back in a few days later,I promise.My friend is having a hard time now.He need me behind him.
David(奋力摘下金边半框眼镜,激动地提高了声调):You——You can't imagine how many people who have talent are managed to show themselves every day!Hard working is just for these which you have achieved——success and fame!But look at you,give up National Artists Association's invitation so easily!
Justin(沉思片刻,站直了身体,走近David,抓住他的肩膀,看着他,郑重地):I know you did a lot of things for me David.So I'v been appreciating you very much.But——I'm sorry this time...for my decision.
David(看着Justin眼中的坚定,有点感动,戴回手上几欲捏碎的眼镜):...I give you my words you are going to regret some day.
David(利落地掏出手机,拨了一通电话,认命地口气略有点缓和):But I don't wanna be like you.I will do my best to postpone the date.
David's cellphone:hello(Tom Gil,the chairman of National Artists Association)
David(非常干练地):yeah,Mr. Gil,this is David Brown...
... ...
on the other side Justin dialed Brian's number...
Jusitn's cellphone:yeah
Justin:listen,I decide to go back with you.
        Michael and Ben both are our friends.I think I should be with you together at this time. There is nothing more important than that.wait for me.
David(向Tom Gil表达了谢意,并代表Justin表示很荣幸受到邀请,结束电话,公事化地口吻):Done.But remember,you have only one week.
Justin(真诚地看了看David,微笑):Got it,thanks.

scene:in a taxi which was on a way to the airport
Brian(深沉地笑着,开玩笑):Are you serious,sunny boy?The guy,I mean your hot agent Mr.Brown.Have you got permission from him?
Brian's cellphone(Justin无奈地):Come on Brian,David is a good guy.Please don't kid him ok?I will arrive at the airport in an hour later.See you then.
Brian(轻声笑了笑,恢复了正经):hey Justin——
Brian's cellphone(等着Brian接下来的话):...
Brian(欲语还休):Uh...nothing...
Brian's cellphone:...Michael is gonna be ok,right?
Brian(轻叹一声,眼神迷茫地看着车窗外的落日余晖,含糊不清地):...I don't know...

Scene:in Justin's Studio
Justin(拿着手机,有些出神,与电话那头的Brian一同陷入沉默):...

TO BE CONTINUED
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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57# cora

斑竹费心了     感动ing:s37
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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再次更新,要结束了哦~~

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:21 编辑

heartless asshole

scene:tomb field
During a simple farewell ceremony,everybody had been sad,facing to Ben's Tombstone.
Debbie(抱住Michael,难掩担忧):are you ok,sweet heart?
Michael(安慰地拍拍Debbie的背):yeah,I'm fine...Don't worry about me,Mom.

Mel、Linds、Em、Ted and Hunter站在一旁,默默看着坚强的母子俩。  
Hunter(动情地):Ben has gone...but we are still here with you...together.
Michael、Debbie听着Hunter的话,从悲伤的情绪中恢复了一些,祖孙三代默契地深深看了看对方,忍住眼泪回给彼此一个鼓励的眼光。

Hunter(想了想,慎重地开口):...uh...besides I have decided to transfer to Pittsburgh University.

Debbie、Michael一同看向Hunter,其它人也纷纷露出惊讶的神情。

Michael(迷惑不解):why?...you have never talked to me before.
Debbie(认真的看着Hunter):Not for us, is it? you know it is unnecessary.
Hunter(两手不停地摩擦着两侧的裤子口袋,眼神中透露出难言的脆弱):I just...just...don't want to be alone,thinking about...death.
Michael(恍然大悟,上前一下抱住Hunter,沮丧地深深自责):Oh~~~I am so sorry...
Debbie(抚慰着Hunter的手,轻声):honey,you will be alright,trust me,and welcome back home.

at the same time
Mel(与Linds窃窃私语):The fact has proved Brian is a heartless asshole.
Linds(一时语塞,无奈地耸耸肩膀,叹了口气):...
Ted(无意间听到她们的对话,眼神四处游移着想找些理由解释):...uh...mybe...I...un...I think——(突然瞪大眼睛,望着不远处一个英挺的身影箭步向这边走来,大声地):he's coming.

众人闻言,看向那个拎着行李袋风尘仆仆朝这边走来的人,定睛一瞧,他背后隐约有缕缕金丝迎风飘舞。

Emmtte(一脸不可思议,嘴张张合合几次之后,确定不是幻觉):...Oh,my god...

TO BE CONTINUED
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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我也不晓得怎么弄会比较好,既能让大家随时知道我的更新,有能把各个短篇和大家的回帖弄得整齐点,麻烦斑竹帮帮忙喽:s21   感激不尽

PS:最近身体不适,打算将短篇(起初是这么打算啦,现在不伦不类的也不晓得怎么分类,管他呢,呵)告一段落先,构思近期的最后一幕ing,另外关于英文对白的问题,仔细看都是些简单的口语(其实本人英文也烂得可以),是为了传达出原汁原味的QAF(譬如一些damn、fuck...的口头禅),这个传统Joyce想坚持下去,请亲们体谅       排版等事宜还请版主多费心,小妮子没齿难忘:s25
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
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更新更新再更新,呵~

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-8 23:03 编辑

sorry,I'm late

scene:Debbie's house       7:30 P.M.

in the living-room

Debbie(拉着Justin的手坐在沙发上,轻拍着他看似依旧稚嫩的脸颊,微笑着感慨):sunshine...look at you...oh honey...you're charming so much.

Emmtte(捏捏Justin的下巴,由衷地):sweet heart,you are like a noble prince.

Teb(拿着马克杯,呷了一口咖啡,站在一旁附和):aha~absolutly.

Justin露出了久违的羞涩笑容,亦如高中毕业舞会前大家眼中那个盛装打扮的孩子。

Melanie(倚靠着流理台,放进嘴里一口蛋糕):How is it going in NewYork?

Justin(笑着回应):fine,just too busy.

Melanie(胳膊顶了顶旁边的Lindsay,低声地):oh,you really should taste it.the cake is so damn delicious!

Debbie(忍不住插话,骄傲地):thanks,sweety.Vic's secret method——

大家敏感地一愣,顿时陷入沉默......

Debbie(看看大家,不自然地大笑几声,打趣):It doesn't matter,he likes being a focus.

Lindsay无奈地白了一眼Melanie,Melanie吐吐舌头,一脸无辜,不作声地闷头继续吃着蛋糕,味如嚼蜡。

Justin(拉着Debbie的手,看着她,惋惜地摇头):I'm sorry for your lost.

Debbie(担忧地回头看看楼梯):thanks.Michael is more serious...

众人不约而同地看向通往Michael房间的楼梯......

Justin(眼神坚定):Trust him...Brian must can handle it.

............................................................................................................................
scene:Michael's room

Michael(坐在床上,手里翻着心爱的漫画书,含笑回忆着):the first time,we met in my comic book store.actually he looked so hot.I still remember his brown jacket,his glasses and his...(自嘲地尴尬地笑笑)ass.

Brian(低着头坏坏地笑笑,看不出是认真还是玩笑地接茬):aha~fuck is forever.

Michael(无奈地斜睨了一眼身边双肘撑着半躺在床上的老友,不置可否地继续着自己的思绪):maybe...maybe a first sight love started from that time.

Brian(不耐烦地好像在说着老掉牙的故事似的接茬):and then you became his husband in damn Canada.(不可思议地看着Michael,皱着眉)Jesus Christ you married!

Michael(被Brian孩子气的耿耿于怀逗笑了):come on Brian,because I had grown up.I had no idear why you cared about it for a long time.

Brian(自嘲地笑):I didn't know ...(若有所思)I didn't know untill that night...Babylon's bomb night...(神经质地笑笑,眼底却没有一丝暖意)fuck damn crazy.

Michael(了然地陈述着事实):Justin has been special for you from the very beginning.you were a real coward,whatever whether or not you recognize.

Brian陷入某种可怕地失去Justin的假设中,仿佛时间又回到了那个混乱可怕的晚上,他沉默着......

Michael(认真地问):if you lost Justin,what would you do?

Brian(想了想,放弃了继续假设):...I don't know...(松了一口气)fortunately he is alive.

Michael手中的漫画书一滑,掉在了地板上。他再也无力撑起坚强的伪装,双手掩面哭泣。

Brian(坐起身子,一把搂过Michael颤抖的身体,让他的头枕着自己的肩膀,一边亲吻着他的额头,一边抚慰着他的头发):sorry Mikey...I'm late...

TO BE CONTINUED
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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最终章了哦!

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:49 编辑

tomorrow is a new day

sometimes we do not feel                 有时候,我们感受不到
like we want to feel                           我们想感受的
sometimes we do not achieve           有时候,我们达不到
what we want to achieve                  我们想达到的
sometimes things that happe            有时候,周围发生的事情
do not make sense                            毫无意义
sometimes life leads us in directions  有时候,生活把我们带向
that are beyond our control               无法控制的方向


it is at these times,most of all           就是这些时候,我们中的多数人
that we need someone                     都需要有个人
who will quietly understand us          默默地理解我们
and be there to support us               在身边支持我们
i want you to know                            我希望你知道
that i am here for you                        我就在你身边
in every way                                      无论发生什么事情
and remember that though                记住
things may be difficult now                虽然现在困难重重
tomorrow is a new day                      但明天,又是崭新的一天


                                                     ——《tomorrow is a new day》


自述(Michael):when the sun rises as usual,lives still keep going on...I know

six days ago,I wept with a broken heart in Brians's arms.(笑)damn it,I even imagine he will laugh me out as it in rest of my life.(郁闷了一会儿)ok,whatever,who care.I just know they supported me through the most difficult time of my life.But——(神秘地笑)Ben and I helped somebody too at the same time.


scene:Brian's loft   
       in the kingsize bed  11:05 P.M.

Brian(低吼一声,释放了积压已久的热情,汗湿地瘫软在Justin身上,笑着喘息):god,you have an amazing,practiced technology sunshine!
Justin(酣畅的情事过后,满足地翻个身,把Brian压在身下,笑着,手在对方胸口轻轻抚摸,暧昧地):you are still crazy and good at fuck.
Brian(自负地笑,玩弄着Justin前额的湿湿的头发):I am an expert at any time...you know it,don't you,honey?
Justin(并不打算否认,幸福地笑着,哄着孩子气的Brian,轻轻舔咬着他的耳垂):yeah,you are always the best.I really want you to stay inside me forever.
Brian(被Justin逗弄得全身骚动起来,抓住他的手,用力把Justin重新压回身下,将他的手拉至头顶上,用低哑性感的嗓音诱惑着):let's do it again and you'll be too satisfied to forget those guys in New York.
Justin(闻言,认真得像是许下承诺似的):nobody but you.
Brian(欲火焚身的野兽,意外听到如此真情地告白,一瞬间,为之动容,深情地睇着Justin,不知是说给自己听还是对Justin说):...you have no chance to regret sunshine...because...I won't let you go again anyway...

接着满室只剩下两人交缠的旖旎风光和令人血脉喷张的淫糜呻吟,甜蜜的爱意尽在不言中......

自述(Jusitn):if life is a journey surrounding love,we will be the end of each other,just as the very beginning.
                our stories started from a sex but love is our happy ending...tomorrow is a new day and we have been ready for it,new stories belong to us will begin immediately...



THE END.


PS:终于告一段落了,god,好辛苦。原来写故事真的会上瘾,之前偶尔写些随笔、散文什么的还不觉得怎样,这次玩票地续写B&J的故事,竟然连写了两周。:s22    今天发发狠,告诉自己一定要搞定ending,然后开始休息,好好工作、学习。感谢大家这些日子的关注与支持,希望最终章能让你们满意,呵~88
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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呵,是连着的。
那麻烦版主把justin's diary(片段)那个帖子和大家的回帖也合并到这里面来吧,我把自己贴的重复的那个帖子删掉,这样看起来整齐一点呢~~:s14
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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