hiromix

喔噢  支持新文
LZ英语真好…

hiromix

哈哈  支持一下～

虽然短  分离的伤感全然流露而出

等闲之贝

。。。谢楼主~

lovebj2009

好伤感呀   夜深人静的时候看这样的文章真是伤心呀

lovebj2009

希望他们长相厮守

准准

去吧去吧...快点去吧
相见恨晚啊

ssuper87

all words, thank you!

young2009

自己写的吗？
呵呵，这里还可以练习英文啊~
本来是来下电影的说~~

young2009

想我男朋友了~~~
I miss you ， my darling~

joycechen1985

Scene:in front of Debbie's house

  Doorbell rang.(a moment later...)Debbie opened the door.

  Emmett and Drewboyd stood there.

Emmett（双手手指交叉放在身前，勉强扬了扬嘴角，思考如何开口，有点手足无措）：Hi，Debbie.I...uh...I've known about it.I mean...uh...

Drewboyd（温柔地看一眼Em，握住他的手，遗憾的看向Deb）：I'm sorry for hear that.

Em看着Deb，泪水浸湿眼眶。

Debbie（满脸倦容，强打精神，仍回了Em一个坚强的微笑，上前抱住Em，安慰地拍拍他的肩膀）：I know ,honey.Come on and in.


Scene:in the living-room

Debbie（朝冰箱走去）：what would you like to drink?
                                   Juice?  coffee?

Drewboyd（单手搂着Em的肩膀，在沙发坐下）：No，thanks，Deb.

Emmett（冷静下来）：How's Michael?

Debbie打开冰箱，拿出盛有自制cookie的盘子，僵了一下，转身走向Em.

Debbie（把盘子放下，叹气）：Nothing is worse.

                                           He has been in his room for an entire day.no eating,no drinking,didn't say any words.

Doorbell rang again.

Debbie:I'm coming.

Debbie opened the door.Ted、Melanie and Lindsay stood there.

Ted（认真地）：I think Michael need all of us now，so I called Mel and Linds.

Lindsay（一脸震惊，摇头，拥抱Deb）：I can't believe it is true.

Melanie（拥抱Deb，安慰）：I'm really sorry.

Debbie（抱着Mel和lindz，双手摸摸她们的背，拍了拍）：I know. Thanks for your coming girls.Come with me.

Scene:in the living-room

Emmett（激动地站起来，拥抱Lindsay和Melanie）：oh，girls.

Drewboyd（向Lindsay和Melanie点头）：Hi~

Melanie（挤出个微笑）：Hi~

Melanie（转向Debbie，无奈地耸耸肩）：About Ben's disease,I mean——so——I don't know how to say it.

Debbie（了然地）：Yes，we all know the day will come sooner or later,but it is still a tremendous hit to Michael.

Ted（四处张望了一下）：Uh...where is Michael?

大家面面相觑，一时无语，悲伤地情绪弥漫开来。

Debbie：He is upstairs，in his room.

Lindsay（平复了情绪，突然意识到什么，环视大家）：damn!Where is  Brian?


PS:昨天安慰了一个失恋的朋友，她很有感触地说：“关键时刻还是老友靠的住”。于是，特别想写一片关于大家的。爱情的美丽在于为我们的生命锦上添花，而亲情和友情却是我们存在的根基，帮我们走过阴霾。珍惜，是我唯一想说的，珍惜现在拥有的一切，生命无常，不要将遗憾留给明天。

cora

1# joycechen1985

爱情的美丽在于为我们的生命锦上添花，而亲情和友情却是我们存在的根基，帮我们走过阴霾。珍惜，是我唯一想说的，珍惜现在拥有的一切，生命无常，不要将遗憾留给明天。

的确是啊，然而亲情和友情却因为总是在我们身边，而容易被视而不见或者当成理所当然

Joyce写的小短篇是连续的，建议可以把它们写在同一个帖子里，这样可以避免读者不知道前面的故事发展噢

208214

不错的剧本~

janlam

板凳又是我哦.....
不知道B大叔去哪了?

joycechen1985

2# cora
谢谢cora提醒，我也在考虑:s14      打算明天考完交则有空再弄，呵

cora

4# joycechen1985
嗯 写着写着就会越来越长啦~
交则是什么

mik

温暖的大家庭

joycechen1985

5# cora

交通法规，不知道为啥，教练都简称为“交则”，呵

joycechen1985

to be with you，my friends

scene: in Justin's Studio of N.Y.City    3:15 P.M.
A fierce debate was being between Justin and David（Justin's agent）.

David（烦躁地在不大的空间里踱来踱去，松了松领带，停下来深吸一口气，尽力让自己保持冷静，转过身面对Justin）:Taylor,please calm down ，and then think about it again,carefully,ok?
Justin（单手从身后撑着，靠着工作台，冷静地再次试图跟David沟通）：David I'll come back in a few days later,I promise.My friend is having a hard time now.He need me behind him.
David（奋力摘下金边半框眼镜，激动地提高了声调）：You——You can't imagine how many people who have talent are managed to show themselves every day!Hard working is just for these which you have achieved——success and fame!But look at you,give up National Artists Association's invitation so easily!
Justin（沉思片刻，站直了身体，走近David，抓住他的肩膀,看着他，郑重地）：I know you did a lot of things for me David.So I'v been appreciating you very much.But——I'm sorry this time...for my decision.
David（看着Justin眼中的坚定，有点感动，戴回手上几欲捏碎的眼镜）：...I give you my words you are going to regret some day.
David（利落地掏出手机，拨了一通电话，认命地口气略有点缓和）：But I don't wanna be like you.I will do my best to postpone the date.
David's cellphone：hello（Tom Gil，the chairman of National Artists Association）
David（非常干练地）：yeah,Mr. Gil,this is David Brown...
... ...
on the other side Justin dialed Brian's number...
Jusitn's cellphone：yeah
Justin：listen,I decide to go back with you.
        Michael and Ben both are our friends.I think I should be with you together at this time. There is nothing more important than that.wait for me.
David（向Tom Gil表达了谢意，并代表Justin表示很荣幸受到邀请，结束电话,公事化地口吻）：Done.But remember,you have only one week.
Justin（真诚地看了看David，微笑）：Got it,thanks.

scene：in a taxi which was on a way to the airport
Brian（深沉地笑着，开玩笑）：Are you serious,sunny boy?The guy,I mean your hot agent Mr.Brown.Have you got permission from him?
Brian's cellphone（Justin无奈地）：Come on Brian,David is a good guy.Please don't kid him ok?I will arrive at the airport in an hour later.See you then.
Brian（轻声笑了笑，恢复了正经）：hey Justin——
Brian's cellphone（等着Brian接下来的话）：...
Brian（欲语还休）：Uh...nothing...
Brian's cellphone：...Michael is gonna be ok，right?
Brian（轻叹一声，眼神迷茫地看着车窗外的落日余晖，含糊不清地）：...I don't know...

Scene：in Justin's Studio
Justin（拿着手机，有些出神，与电话那头的Brian一同陷入沉默）：...

TO BE CONTINUED

janlam

嗯....那沙发在这边坐一下....{:3_278:}

jiwei112

看了
留一贴在此......

cora

我把Joyce之前的帖子都合并在一起了，看成功不
论坛改版后的合并功能……是个数学逻辑问题 = =

joycechen1985

57# cora

斑竹费心了     感动ing:s37

joycechen1985

heartless asshole

scene:tomb field
During a simple farewell ceremony,everybody had been sad,facing to Ben's Tombstone.
Debbie（抱住Michael，难掩担忧）:are you ok,sweet heart?
Michael（安慰地拍拍Debbie的背）:yeah,I'm fine...Don't worry about me,Mom.

Mel、Linds、Em、Ted and Hunter站在一旁，默默看着坚强的母子俩。  
Hunter（动情地）:Ben has gone...but we are still here with you...together.
Michael、Debbie听着Hunter的话,从悲伤的情绪中恢复了一些，祖孙三代默契地深深看了看对方，忍住眼泪回给彼此一个鼓励的眼光。

Hunter（想了想，慎重地开口）：...uh...besides I have decided to transfer to Pittsburgh University.

Debbie、Michael一同看向Hunter，其它人也纷纷露出惊讶的神情。

Michael（迷惑不解）：why?...you have never talked to me before.
Debbie（认真的看着Hunter）：Not for us, is it? you know it is unnecessary.
Hunter（两手不停地摩擦着两侧的裤子口袋，眼神中透露出难言的脆弱）：I just...just...don't want to be alone,thinking about...death.
Michael（恍然大悟，上前一下抱住Hunter，沮丧地深深自责）：Oh~~~I am so sorry...
Debbie（抚慰着Hunter的手，轻声）：honey，you will be alright，trust me,and welcome back home.

at the same time
Mel（与Linds窃窃私语）:The fact has proved Brian is a heartless asshole.
Linds（一时语塞，无奈地耸耸肩膀，叹了口气）：...
Ted（无意间听到她们的对话，眼神四处游移着想找些理由解释）：...uh...mybe...I...un...I think——（突然瞪大眼睛，望着不远处一个英挺的身影箭步向这边走来，大声地）：he's coming.

众人闻言，看向那个拎着行李袋风尘仆仆朝这边走来的人，定睛一瞧，他背后隐约有缕缕金丝迎风飘舞。

Emmtte（一脸不可思议，嘴张张合合几次之后，确定不是幻觉）：...Oh,my god...

TO BE CONTINUED

cora

继续之前合并的话题……
要不把这个帖子也合并到短篇集里面? 因为论坛现在的合并功能会自动把帖子按发帖时间排列，这意味着合并之后新的短篇集可能会排在这个合并贴后面。可能到时Joyce就要手动编辑一下帖子的顺序了（利用每个回帖下方的编辑键就可以编辑自己发的回帖）
Joyce你看想怎样?

joycechen1985

60# cora
我也不晓得怎么弄会比较好，既能让大家随时知道我的更新，有能把各个短篇和大家的回帖弄得整齐点，麻烦斑竹帮帮忙喽:s21   感激不尽

PS：最近身体不适，打算将短篇（起初是这么打算啦，现在不伦不类的也不晓得怎么分类，管他呢，呵）告一段落先，构思近期的最后一幕ing，另外关于英文对白的问题，仔细看都是些简单的口语（其实本人英文也烂得可以），是为了传达出原汁原味的QAF（譬如一些damn、fuck...的口头禅），这个传统Joyce想坚持下去，请亲们体谅       排版等事宜还请版主多费心，小妮子没齿难忘:s25