David1900

俺的英文太滥了！好难懂的诗！:funk: 逃走！
LZ等我再学半年英文再来看！em08

David1900

是我太笨了还是这首诗太难了！不管是英文还是中文我都读不懂！
我觉得诗还是写得简单点好，太难了像我这样的白痴都看不懂！(也可能LZ本来就没打算想让白痴看懂！)

LZ这首诗是写给Justin的吧！
我也来写一首，不过我从来不给虚幻的角色写东西，我只给真实的人写！
所以这些话是写给我在村里遇到的一个特别的人的！虽然他并不会注意到我！

PS：我只有四级的水平，Chinglish和语病在所难免，请大家见谅！
       要丢砖的话，请小块点，俺怕痛！
       (诗应该没什么标点的，但是我是玩票，所以还是加上了！)


Every day I seek in the endless dark,
but I don't know what I am seeking.
I am shedding every color from my body,  
but I don't konw which color is the truth of me.
When everything that I try to hold onto,
no matter how hard i try,
just seems to slip away.
Hopelessly, I doubt
whether the happiness can never be touched like the stars.

Suddenly, just like the the dawn breaks the night,
you open my angeleyes and let me see the color of life.
All the things I couldn't see are now so clear to me.
You make me believe if only I keep looking I'll find the real me.
In your eyes, I see the faith that I can be anything.
It's you that lead me to reach for heaven.
No, it's the colorful you that make the paradise surrounding me!